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   You woke up excited this morning. You were going out shopping with Antonio, your best friend and secret crush (Shh!). Quickly, you got dressed in (fav. outfit) and rushed out the door.
    You got to your meeting place earlier than expected, so you sat on the edge of a nearby fountain and watched the clouds float across the sky. Large clouds gathered in the distance. 'I hope it doesn't storm...' you thought, shivering. 'I really hate them. The thunder and lightning is scary.' 
    Suddenly, Toni popped out of nowhere, tearing you out of your thoughts. "Hola, _____! You ready, querida?" 
    "Yeah, Toni! Let's go!" You jumped up, linking your arm in his, and started walking through town.
~~Time skip to random shop~~

    You walked up to the counter, placing your merchandise next to the register, Toni flanking you. A middle-aged woman with graying hair rung up your items.
    "You look like such a cute couple!" she said, bagging the purchase.
    You felt your face heat up as you hastily replied, "Oh, n-no! We're not a couple, just friends." Glancing over at Toni, you saw that his face was also a bright red, but the was a flicker of hurt in his eyes. Did he...? No. That wasn't possible.
    "Mmhm." she muttered disbelievingly, looking from you to Toni. "Whatever you say."
    You quickly exited the store. The sky had grown dark and a storm was obviously brewing. Toni shrugged it off as nothing, but you immediately began worrying. Toni didn't know you were afraid of storms...
    You walked over to an ice cream stand and ordered two ice creams, trying to keep your mind off of the approaching storm. You pulled out your wallet. Toni stepped up beside you. "Hey, I'll pay this time, querida." He said, flashing you a smile.
    "O-okay..." You said quietly, taking a small step back. "I'll pay you back, okay?" You rummaged absentmindedly through your shopping bag.
    Toni handed you your ice cream when a sudden flash of lightning and rumble of thunder reminded you of your fear. You dropped your ice cream and just stood there, frozen in terror.
    "______...? ______~?" Toni asked, waving a hand in front of your face. Mentally shaking your head, you snapped out of your daze.
    "Sorry, Toni. I'm back." You chuckled nervously, trying to mask your fear.
    "______ are you-" Toni started but was cut off by another loud clap of thunder. You squeaked and ran, wanting to get out of the storm. It started raining, sprinkling at first, then pouring. Toni chased after you, calling your name.
    "______! ______! ______, please wait!" Desperate, you ran as fast as you could, but Toni was faster. He stopped you and pulled you under  a tree, out of the rain.
    "_______... are you afraid of storms?" he asked seriously, gazing deep into your (e/c) eyes. You nodded slowly. "You should have told me! I wish I'd known, the we wouldn't be in this mess."
    "I know, but it's a silly fear. I was afraid you'd laugh at me." You admitted, feeling your cheeks flush.
    Toni placed a hand on your shoulder and cupped your cheek in the other. "Now why would I do that, querida?"
    "I...I don't know. I just thought-" You were suddenly cut off by soft lips on your own. In shock, you merely stood there for a moment until he pulled away.
    "lo siento, ______, if you don't feel the same way..."
    "Oh, but I do. Te amo, To-EEP!" Another lightning bolt struck, causing you to hide your face in Antonio's soaked shirt. He chuckled softly, wrapping his arms around you. "Don't worry, querida. I'll protect you. Now let's go inside."
    You nod as he picks you up bridal style and carries into the nearest building- an old abandoned church. He laid you down on a pew, your head in his lap.
    You start to say something but he shushes you. "Go to sleep, ______. I'll be right here. Nothing bad will happen."
    "Thank you...Toni..." You mutter before falling into a deep sleep, forgetting about your fear of storms.
    After he was sure you were asleep, Toni leaned down and softly kissed your lips and whispered into your ear. "Te amo, ______...I'll keep you safe."
    You smile in your sleep as Toni makes himself comfortable and falls asleep as well, a protective arm around you.
This was a lot longer in my notebook...and I just finished it during a thunderstorm...the irony! XD Anyways, this is a one shot story.
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coverletter Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fear of storms? I have a fear of trains . That's more embarrassing 😂
xXRaggedFangXx Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  Student General Artist
Omg as soon as I read this I thought of Hikaru and Haruhi from ouran host club
loulouh2o Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
So not a sorta good copy of OHSHC
kawaiipup123194625 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Student Writer
I was thinking ouran when I read the part when they were getting ice cream and then went to a church like haruhi did when hikaru and haruhi were on a date. 😊
tokyomewmewfan137 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Student Artist
I thought of it too even had the song played in that scene in my head
ArtisticWolfy Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
ME Second thousandth!
Arisa012345 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Student Writer
I totally thought of the same thing
SportyNerdyGurl Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015
omg same! I was like deja vu much
PsychoKittiy Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Student Writer
DUDE OMG I THOUGHT THAT TOOO cept Spain wasn't a big meanie
SportyNerdyGurl Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
ya Hikaru can be a douche
ZEAWSUMPERSON1 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
this suddenly reminds me of Ouran HSHC.......AWESOME!!!
puppypaws12121 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Student Writer
Ikr! It sounds just like OHSHC! But I love it! Spain is too adorable (if there is such thing)!
ZEAWSUMPERSON1 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
spain's got the magic~
puppypaws12121 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Student Writer
ZEAWSUMPERSON1 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
 do you have the magic?
ARandomFanGiirl Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
hetaliaizmal1fe Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
KISS KISS FALL IN LOVE NA NANA NANA HEY HEY HEY but you profile pic is fabulous
thelittlemermello Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an episode of OHSHC XD
onehellofabutler4321 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
was this inspired by ouran high school host club
cuz i remember an episode where haruhi was out shopping woht hikaru
and well it was kinda like this
zebraqueen098 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I dont think ive seen that episode OR BECAUSE ITS BEEN A FLIPPIN YEAR
sokoakaberry Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
Fluffeh~ and im actually scared of storms, but i only have pillows for comfort...COMFORT MEH TONI, COMFORT MEH
tinarules007 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Was I the only one worried about their safety being under a tree
sokoakaberry Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
DemCupcakes030 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Student Writer
Nope, I was thinkin

what if the tree was struck by lightning and got caught on fire?
good thing that didn't happen
aotsnklevi Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
InsightfulPsychopath Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
I'm sorry, but according to my friends, I cannot enter a church.
PeaceLuvLife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student General Artist
and I shall dream happy dreams of Antonio!

veronica194 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ouran high school host club
NoelVermillion987 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
"An old abandoned church"
..... you..... did you?........ omfg..... OURAN HIGH SCHOOL HOST CLUB XD
amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student General Artist
An old abandoned church,
very safe *Has Holy Cross ready*
SukiAckerman Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Student Artist
this is from ouran highschool host club when Haruhi and Hikaru go on a date together awe I love that episode and I loved how you wrote this story. XD SO KAWAII
Lyra-the-NeKo Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
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ArisaKZ Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
:. 1 like how Toni was calling reader-chan querida [Which1nAWay1GuessTranslatesToDear and nobody really mentioned... .:
I-am-the-Philippines Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student Writer
Ouran!! And my Favorite episode too! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
otakuperson88 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
otakuperson88 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Are we like the new haruhi and tamaki or something? Great story
LauniSmooth Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It was haruhi and hikaru in that episode not tamaki!

(Even though I ship her with both guys lol)
otakuperson88 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015
that's what I meant I feel stupid now *facepalm*
LauniSmooth Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol don't worry we all have are moments (and if you are a fellow fangirl you can simply blame everything on a random anime) <---- it works all the time for me because no one knows what I'm talking about
asianturnip Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's exactly what I thought
BananaTachibana Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
This is just like one of the scenes from Ouran High School Host Club! : D
NatureTune Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Yes i thought that way too :highfive:
The only difference is that Toni didn`t leave reader lone in the storm and fear.

*whispers* Well done Toni. Clap

And i like this ficNod 
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student General Artist
There is only one thing that scares me more than storms....

Old abandoned churches. Fuck you Toni.

Those things are like my biggest fears. Sucks cause its storming, and there's a old abandoned church sic blocksawayDX
asianturnip Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol. not to be offensive, but what religion r u?
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Christian/Catholic XD

And it's not offensive ^^
asianturnip Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe^^ I'm christian.. but may i ask, why r u afraid of churches if ur christian/catholic?
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student General Artist
It's the old abandoned ones that scare me. I go to churches (not often though XD) but it's the really old abandoned ones that scare me
asianturnip Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh... yeah. They r kinda creepy, but they're fun to walk around in and explore
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I tend to stay away from them XD
The weird thing is I'm fine walking around abandoned, really old houses, but not churches that are old and abandoned
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